"Lola, Lola, wake up!" As I wake her up(AGAIN), she says,
"Isis is coming over and we are having breakfast together." So I went downstairs to make some eggs, hash browns, bacon, and dutch babies (a German pancake type thing). When Isis arrived ringing the doorbell nonstop. I yelled "I got it."
"Hi Zorah, thanks for inviting me over!" Isis said.
As the Bacon sizzles in the pan, the timer buzzes for the dutch babies, and the eggs are done frying, it was time for an enormous and delicious breakfast.
After breakfast we hopped into the pink Bentley after breakfast and in a glance we were in Ancient Greece. We stepped out of the car and it was 100 degrees! I really loved the scenery and all the mountains with great views. I was especially astounded on how beautiful the farm was. We headed for the the front door of the house down the long pathway.. As it got shorter and shorter, a farmer opens the door to greets us, his name is Zeno. We introduced ourselves as well, and I take a look at Isis whose eyes were sparkling with happiness. She says, "Wow; your farm is superior compared to the others." (I can tell she is in love at first sight) As we went on talking to the farmer he told us all about the food and crops in Greece; they all sounded delicious. My favorite foods that Zeno said were the olives and grapes, he also mentioned how they raised sheep and goats to make milk and cheese! I think so far I am really liking Greece and will want to stay for awhile.
Nice use of dialogue.
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You always have the yummiest breakfast!
ReplyDeleteNice use of Superior ;-)
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